Migration expert said my page layout was 'confusing the reader' on a technical blog post last month

I spent 2 hours rearranging headers and bolding key terms after one comment from a guy who works at a data center. He pointed out my list of tasks was buried under a generic title and nobody would read past the first paragraph. Has anyone else had to totally rework a spread based on a single piece of feedback from someone outside journaling?

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wadeowens23d ago

Did the feedback actually fix your readership drop or was it just busywork?

beth_stone23d ago

Had the same thing happen with my bullet journal layout. One comment from a database guy about my color coding system and I spent a whole Sunday redoing everything.